Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to hold a big
Party and invite many people to come than a small party where only a few close
Friends and family members are invited.
Since the beginning of the time, human being has always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history, the family has played a pivotal role in all societies. Today, friendship has very high place in human’s communications as well. In some people, their best friends are closer to them than their siblings. so, we can argue in modern society family and friends are two prominent influential and important groups in human’s life. In my opinion, a small party with those ones who close to us is more suitable than a big party with all the people we know. I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding reasons.
First and foremost without any shadow of doubt, we are happier when we are with one who understands us. A good friendship is made from a deep emotional bond that makes those who are in relation happy and satisfied. The friend knows each other and most of the times, they have the same hobbies. A good friendship is like a gift we give it to ourselves. a good family is the most important bond in every one life. I believe if families hold a small party most of times they can enrich their relationships and bring more love to their home. I believe hold a party with one we love and care is more fun than with someone who we know just a friend from work or university.
The second reason I would like to bring here is holding a big party requires a lot of money and preparing a big place. Overall, holding a big party is noting except a big trouble with lot of stress and aftermath. I believe what we do at a big party we can do that in a little one with higher quality and more comfortable circumstance. For example, this summer my sister holds a big birthday party for my litter niece, she and her husband worked a lot and spend a lot of money and time to holding that and in entire party they were dying from stress but if I were them I would have invited fewer people and worked less and enjoyed more. this is my theory.
To wrap it up and make a long story short I believe hold a small party with those ones are important to us is more reasonable than hold a big party with those ones we just know. but it is my personal opinion some people (like my sister) like to share their happiness with everyone. I think most people have this idea and that’s why Instagram is so popular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42533936652 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46199589841 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468325791855 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0173526345 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171550330157 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514228804328 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524825784171 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100495070172 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053609062207 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.