Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of student. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the beginning of the time, human beings has always strived to improve their living standards and brings more convenience to their day-to-day live.
throughout history, education has played a pivotal role in all societies. human always has a thirst of learning. He always tried to learn new objects and make his life easier. Education is one of the most important achievements of humanity. throughout history we learned, we thought and we made and all of them are the results of education. In my opinion, choosing a favorite study way is very personal and depends on one's behaviors and brains function. personally, I will choose the studying method based on the lesson. I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding reasoned.
First and foremost point that I would like to bring here is that human being brains has different reactions in different situations. we do not react when we are afraid as we are happy or when we are in society as we are alone. Even in different societies, human beings react differently. For examples when we are among our friends we are completely different as we are in the family. human being brain has a very interesting function about society. when we are in a group or brains cell will realize that we aren’t alone, so, in this situation their function isn’t 100 percent. they will relay on the decision of every single person in the group. Thus, I think is better that we use all of our brain cells in their 100 percent presence during the study. I think studying will be more useful and shorter.
On the other hand, the second important point that is remarkable is the lesson. we when we study, obviously, the lesson of the study is most important point. As a personal experience at student time, I realized that for some special lessons it is necessary to study in a group. because some lessons need more than one mind to solve or understand. they need coöperation and consultation for achieving a good answer and ideal results. I think in mathematics and physic it is necessary to study with at least one person because most of this kind of lessons are questions and for answering them, the consultation is prerequisite.
To wrap it up and make a long story short, I prefer to study alone. because most of my works and studies are in the art field and I need loneliness and silence. But for answering my physics or mathematics questions, absolutely I will study in a group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, at least, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7558685446 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7164686005 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483568075117 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8700413082 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.037037037 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96296296296 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15698178853 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445761486385 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560826320248 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913560243302 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799017501977 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.