Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, people have been desired to live in societies, because human's personality is likely to communicate with others. Many people opine that to live in one city in their whole life, however others are claim to move from one place to another city. I personally prefer to move and change my town during my lifetime, I feel this way in two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay
To begin with, changing hometowns provide people many other communities and experiences. To clarify more, each city has its own beliefs, cultures, and traditional histories, which confront people to many other viewpoints. Additionally, people can utilize others experiments that they had before, by the way that having relationship and communicating with more people will results in making more good friends. My grandparents' experience demonstrates this concept. My grandfather was the only one teacher of his area, due to this fact the educating ministry has been sent him to distance location to educate the rural children. They had made many friends in all those places; besides that, they collect much experiments that they have told us every time they came back to our homes.
Moreover, living in many cities helps people to distinguish the best place for inhabiting. As an illustration, cities are various and have a plethora of different features. If people move from one place to another, they will find the best place, which matches to their interests and habits. Therefore, people can inhabit there and start a peaceful life without any regrets. Take me for instance; when I started my university, I was required to leave my town and locate in another city, after my graduation I went to another city to do my assistantship, after a while they transferred me to a foreign country. Finally, based on these exchanging, I have found my attractive city and I feel awesome here in Toronto. If I had stayed at my hometown, I would not have found my best place.
By considering all the previous information, one can conclude that It would be better for people to change their cities during their life time, not only it provides them many more experiences and good friends, but also helps them to find their beloved place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...and communicating with more people will results in making more good friends. My grandpa...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...hose places; besides that, they collect much experiments that they have told us ever...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94973544974 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76828941331 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2463691852 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9375 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174669431672 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636297754012 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680927096446 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126326305089 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622609630991 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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