Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no denying that due to this hectic life, living becomes hard and full of tensions and stresses, which may hurt people's health, both physically and mentally. Therefore, people have to try to relax and get rid of those tensions. Many opine that it is better to reveal stresses by spending time alone, while others have a controversial view. I am on board with the latter group, and I will explore my reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, spending time with friends and family helps people not to think of their tensions. Since the dawn of humanity, people have been living in communities and public societies, which has helping them to be happier and have no feeling of loneliness. They have learned how to come up with the problems and help each other in hard situations. When someone has stress and needs to be relaxed, friends can make the atmosphere more suitable to forget those things. My experience demonstrates this concept. Two years ago, I had to finish my thesis as soon as possible to apply for a higher grade in a U.S. university before the deadline. Whereas my professor was getting married, and she was busy with her wedding party. I was so nervous far in excess even I could not talk to anyone. My friends prepared a trip to Goa, and they took me there, we had spent a lot of fun time there. I cannot imagine how that trip could make me relaxed and helped me to forget my problem.
Moreover, spending time with families in stressful times would help people get relaxed by their advice. To put in a more vivid picture, parents are the ones who people begin their lives with, and they know each other better than anyone. They try their best to help their children to fix their problems. On the other hand, they have many more experiences that children can benefit from them. Hence, should people try to pass their hard times with families, they will be more relaxed and release their tensions. Take my brother to instance; when he was 14 years old, he had a volleyball competition; his coach had told him he must win the race, and this sentence made him much worry and stressed. My mother helped him a lot in this era and told him if he loses the competition, there is no reason for being sad or unhappy, every failure would become a step to reach success. Surprisingly, he became relaxed and was not worry about the result anymore.
By considering all the previously mentioned information, spending time with people would be a better approach to be relaxed. Not only friends help people to have happy and funny times, but also they can use and benefit from parents' advises and experiments.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, i feel, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59619450317 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41352643298 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3804883221 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7083333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1271728393 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422638286679 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490425851207 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891417887947 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198994201983 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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