Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records. Which approach do you prefer, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this day and large, technology has been improving, and a vast portion of people is using social media such as Instagram, Facebook, Tweeter, etc. which enables them to put their photos and videos on them. Many people opine to make a record of their life by uploading them in media, while others have a controversial viewpoint. I prefer to take records of my daily life, and I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, taking records of experiences on social media would be a reminder to me about the fact that life is going on. There is no denying that life is fulfilled by various feelings and experiences, which come to people and may cause them to feel numerous emotions. Additionally, social networking can remind people what they had posted years before, while people have another feeling now. My own experience demonstrates this concept. Four years ago, I had broken up with my boyfriend, time was passing hard for me, and life was a disaster. I could not imagine living without him. I had posted many sad pictures and had written unhappy captions. Following that, my life has changed, and I forgot those awful feelings, by the way, this year, Instagram has reminded me of those posts and text, which shows me the feelings and emotions are not stable and life is passing. The more reviewing past posts and captions, the more peace people can find in their life by realizing that nothing is permanent.
Moreover, sharing life experiences throughout network sites will help people to profit from each other's experiments. As an illustration, life is too short, and there is not enough time to try everything individually, so using others' experiences will show people their way and help them to distinguish their path and approach. Accordingly, should people share their life throughout the networking applications, many more people can utilize and educate from them. For instance, my sister is following many bloggers and YouTubers in her network accounts, and she learns many things from them. One day, she confronted with a stranger who wanted to fool her. Fortunately, one of the bloggers she was following had talked about these situations before, and my sister managed that. If she had not watched that video before, she would have stocked in an unpleasant situation.
By considering all the previously mentioned information, I prefer to use social network sites to upload my data, not only it works as a reminder of my past feelings, but also, I can get much information about others' experiences. I hope many more people try to benefit from social media and be more satisfied with their lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, i feel, such as, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89800443459 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68011250387 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518847006652 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3440230927 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.409090909 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247182891687 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749470347734 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632018948979 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172825041027 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448984254583 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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