Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern era, governments are responsible to provide many services for people to make their lives more facilitate. It is so important to distinguish the societies' needs and try to fix and improve them. Building roads, hospitals, schools, and parks are so crucial as the internet access is vital, so they have some schedules to provide internet access to all citizens. In this case, some controversy arises as should it be free or not. I opine that if internet access be on charge, it will be resulted better, I feel this way for two reasons, which
I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, paying for internet access, makes people more appreciate and careful of using their internet. To clarify more, people are working hard to earn money and they are awareness of how to use their money and budget. If governments provide free internet, people and even child spend their precious time on the internet, which may cause many physical and mental disorders. Therefore, the more money they pay on the internet, the more using carefully. My experience demonstrates this concept, when I was a child, my parents gave me money to buy foods and coffee at the school, but I did not and used to keep myself hungry till afternoon to spend that money on Mac Donald's unhealthy junk foods. After a while, when I went to university in another city, I had to work to earn money, which made me understood the money's precious, since then I am watchful of using my money.
Moreover, providing internet access on charge, will be resulted in governments revenue. As an illustration, governments are mangers of country and they have to invest on every living feature. This aim can not be reachable without having money. A large portion of governments' budget will be obtained by put taxing for people, and also leaving tickets on for example public transporting. If people pay for using internet, public leaders will have revenue, which can be use on other areas. Take my country for example; Armenia. The country was suffering from air pollution last decade; however, the government invest a huge amount of money on transportation, and also put some tickets for people on using their private cars in some dedicated times. After a while, the air pollution had become better and the revenue of using bus, trains, and subways invested on making parks and green places. Hence, should governments provide internet access for fee, the income will increase that can be used on many other things.
By considering all the previous information, one can conclude that since internet is so vital for people and they need to use it in their daily life, governments should offer it on charge. Not only it will resulted in societies income, but also put people in the better way of using the internet without wasting the time or internet data.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83917525773 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58306658227 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486597938144 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8165555115 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.681818182 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0454545455 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27046191783 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931363382952 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800184362214 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158527216769 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663906009921 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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