Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I strongly disagree that it is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place another.
Some people believe that it is better to live in a same city or town all your entire life than to move from one place to another. To support their view, they cite living in one place helps you to know the city or town better and it makes easy to live a life. However, I disagree with these people and think that it is better to move from one place to another place. I will support my viewpoints with three reasons.
First of all, moving from one city or town to another is better because you may get better job opportunities. We all know that, the job opportunities varies from place to place. The job opportunities in New York is not same as in California. When you move from one place to another, you may get better job opportunity and may get higher pay, as a result, you can earn much money and support your family better. For instance, my brother used to live in Pokhara and had a job there few years back. After living and doing a job in Pokhara for several years, he decided to move Kathmandu from Pokhara. His pay was average in Pokhara, however, when he came to kathmandu, in initial days he had difficulties in finding a job. But after some time, since Kathmandu is a Capital city, he got a job with very good salary. After some time, he bought a house and enrolled his children in a reputed English school. In contrast, if he had never moved to Kathmandu, he may not have well paid job as well as his children would not get a chance to study in a reputed English medium school. Hence, it is better to move from one place to another.
Second of all, it is better to move from one place to another because it helps you to make variety of friends. When you have friends from diverse area, you may get better insight about the world and it also makes your life easier. For example, my girlfriend usually move from place to place after living that place for more than 5 years. Her job shifts place after five years. As a result she has an opportunity to make friends in different cities of different sector. Her some friends are doctors, Engineers, politicians, journalists and many more. When she needs help in any field, she immediately calls them and ask for help. They also help her in difficult situation.Which has made her life very much easy. Notwithstanding, I don't move from place to place, I just live in my hometown so that I have not variety of friends in different realms. Consequently, when I face a difficult situation, I usually hard to find the solution. In contrast to my girlfreind's life, my life is a bit hard. So it is important to have variety of freinds which is only possible through moving from one place to another.
To conclude, some people think that staying in a one place helps them to understand the city or town they live and it makes easy to live a life. Nonetheless, I think that moving place to place is important in order to find a better job opportunity and to make variety of frends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...place helps you to know the city or town better and it makes easy to live a life....
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...time, he bought a house and enrolled his children in a reputed English school. In...
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... Her job shifts place after five years. As a result she has an opportunity to make...
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...ey also help her in difficult situation.Which has made her life very much easy. Notwi...
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...ey also help her in difficult situation.Which has made her life very much easy. Notwi...
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...life very much easy. Notwithstanding, I dont move from place to place, I just live i...
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...have not variety of friends in different realms. Consequently, when I face a diff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, as a result, as well as, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2490.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 568.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3838028169 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46030527843 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.385563380282 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 808.2 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5604565898 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422753216591 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137066707167 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142025234445 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350479842035 0.150856017488 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158099686557 0.0645574589148 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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