Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally agreed that the place we live in is playing a pivotal role in our life and our general satisfaction. Due to its important characteristics, there is a long-standing discussion among people that whether they live in one town or a city for their whole life or move to other places. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that living in one place is more convenient and preferable, whereas others prefer to change their settlement from one place to another one. Although it is a bit hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I do believe that living in many places is a perfect idea. It can help us to discover vague parts of our life, make new friends and present many commercial benefits to us.
To begin with, one of the compelling reasons that justify the thesis is that this decision helps to unwrap unknown features in life that we can not do it if we live just in one place, To illustrate this point one need only refer to many cultures, languages, and weather that exist in other places, and we do not have any knowledge about them. Take for example, living in one place presents a repetitive climate and its really boring. For instance, the weather in Canada is freezing during winter and warm in summer. It is clear, you do not have any information about Sahara when you live in Canada, however, moving to Africa can give you this valuable experience. Imagine how much nice weather such as the Mediterranean, South America and so on, you can experience. In addition, by living in one place you just speak one language, whereas, by moving to other places you can learn other languages. Needless to say that knowing many languages brings you many benefits.
Let us continuous by considering the fact that living in many places results in meeting new people, then new friends. However, living in one place presents limited friends. From a personal experience, I recall when I moved to Montreal I did not have any friends in the city but after a while, I could find many mates. Indeed, these new friends were added to my previous bunch. As you can see, in a new place people are more welcoming to accepting strangers in their circle.
Last but not least, gaining new work experiences from a wide range of people's attitudes and behaviors enables us to find a better job. Needless to say that jobs opportunity in one place normally is limited to a few jobs and positions. On the other hand, moving to other places and gaining new experiences lead to getting high pay jobs which has a profound impact on many spheres of life. I remember that when I move to Montreal, I faced many job positions which helped me to be free in order to make decisions for my future career.
In summary, with all these taken into account, moving to new places can bring many benefits. It is useful to find a good job, learn new skills, and make new friends. It would be would nice for other people to move to other cities and avoid being sedentary.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 530.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58113207547 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52269442939 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1523305639 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04166666667 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278204034746 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08216645766 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641265231947 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156585710868 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068000158435 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.