Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Choosing the right man or woman to marry with in your life it is always a struggling choice. It looks that difficult because in a romantic relationship you must accept some compromises and these ones must be well-balanced in order to make the relationship works. For this reason, even if on one hand it is confortable to spend your time with someone who is very similiar to you and always agree with your ideas, on the other hand it is also important to be with someone who introduce you to different views of the world and who keeps the relationship active.
First of all, many people choose the marry their sibling in order to keep away conflicts and living a easy life. As a matter of fact, nobody in this world wish to come back home after a tough day at work and having to discuss with their lover about political issues and conflictual ideas. For this reason, even if a little of struggle is unavoidable, a couple must share some common ideals and values that would help them even in the worstest crisis' situation.
Moreover, there are people who are attracted from the novelty and from the wild and strange side of their lover. Of course, at first the relationship could work but when they will come to more substantial decisions such as deciding the design of their new house or argumenting about the education of their children, it could be very difficult to manage.
In conclusion, since the two extreme cases could be dangerous for the healthiness of the relationship between the two lover a middle way must be found. As a matter of fact it is not a problem if your lover's favourite footbal team is Inter while yours is Barcellona, while it could be a critical problem if you are racist and your lovely half works with a no-profit society who helps a community of black people to be integrated in the american society. As I have already said in the starting lines, a relationship is all about finding the right balance and compromises.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'these' instead.
Suggestion: these
...ip you must accept some compromises and these ones must be well-balanced in order to make ...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...order to keep away conflicts and living a easy life. As a matter of fact, nobody ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6076885618 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531609195402 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5310145437 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.181818182 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6363636364 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 5.45110844103 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176835966102 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061731463294 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860749533288 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102626845773 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928397587527 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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