Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries.

Many people in this world love going to work every morning and live happily without even give a thought about their salaries or promotions. However, many voices question whether people choose jobs with low salaries or high salaries. In my opinion, people should work on low salaries but enjoy their lives. There are two reasons for my opinion, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, working on low salaries but enjoy doing what you do is really essential. Although low salaries do not give individuals luxurious cars and lavish homes, but they live their lives with their best, enjoy every part of it without complaining. To be more specific, I work in a biology department at a small school. I started teaching five years ago and my salary is still the same. Most of the time no one thinks about the teachers that how hard working they are and how much time they put in to check students' assignments. The government or private schools never think of increasing their salaries. However, I love my job, I love what I do every day. I feel like i help thousands of students by making them learn about new topics of biology. Thus, no matter how low my salary is, I love what i do at my job and consequently, it makes me achieve a great sense of satisfaction and growth in this field.

Moreover, low salaries often brings you many advantages which do not come with high salaries. Those benefits definitely destress many people's lives. A great example of this would be my own company. Seven years ago, I started working at a small firm as a researcher. My salary was unexpectedly low. The wonderful thing about that firm was a benefit of long vacations. As soon as i knew about this benefit at my interview, I made an impulsive decision to join this firm. Due to this advantage of long vacations, i got to spend good time with my friends and families. We visited three different states every year. It also helped me to stay relaxed so that i could be more productive at my work. As a result, I never had any problem with low salary because of this major reason of a long vacation benefits.

All in all, I strongly believe one should opt for low salary that they enjoy working. This is because you love doing what you do at work and also get to spend time with your loved ones and you will be able to live life with no tension.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, thus, i feel, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50700934579 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46414036292 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511682242991 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1053570652 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1923076923 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349873171184 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962838833172 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108250863475 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237195523096 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528600958839 0.0645574589148 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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