Competitiveness in every field has rocketed with start of new mellinium. With increased compititon, people are wrecklessly accepting whatever chances they get without considering the consequences. Very few lucky people have been able to live their life according to plan. Remaining are compromising in every step of life just to stay in the competition. However, compromising in life is not an option. Therefore I firmly believe people need to do whatever they enjoy eventhough they are paid less. I will try to prove my position through following arguments.
First, Money cannot buy happiness. Although you are gaining high and adding wealth, deep down you are unsatisfied because of your booring job. What is the use of wealth when you are depressed? Anyway money turns to be only a piece of paper if you are unsatisfied. Lets talk about famous personality Elon Mosk. He lost his family wealth when he made his first investment. He was bankrupt. Still he tried his best the next time even though he feared of being a failure. He got that courage because he was doing the thing that he loved the most. Even if he failed the first time, he didn't lose hope because he believed he was learning something from his failure. Thus, doing what we love the most gives us that courage and satisfaction which money cannot give.
Second, Humans are a good learner. You learn better when you are enjoying things. Lets relate this with kindergarden classes. Classes in kindergarden are colourful, joyful and child friendly. Why? It is simply to establish environment where kids can learn properly. Similary, we learn better when environment around us is familiar, when we are mentally calm and healthy. Can we learn things when we are being disturbed constantly? No. In the same manner, doing jobs that we prefer creates joyful environment. But, unenjoyable jobs create burden in mind which disturbes us constantly. Therefore, doing jobs that we prefer would indirectly trigger our productivity and creativity.
Finally, unpreferable task creates hell around us. It creates burden as we are doing thing hesitantly. We are forced to do that job. We feel pressured. Do we fell better when we are pressured? No, absolutely not. It is human psychology that feels dominated and disturbed when pressured. For example, if a person selects a job that he does not prefer because he is needy of money then he will feel pressured by needs of money. If this pressure prolongs, it would not only affect his mental wellbeing but also affecst his efficiency in work. He starts doing thing wrongly. This would eventually hamper his life.Thus, doing tasks that we donot prefer creates hostile environment which would eventually affect us.
Hence, considering all of these factors it is quite clear that we need to do tasks that we prefer even though it is low-key paid. Doing jobs we preferred aids us in establishing sound mental environment. Not only this, it would also help in improving our productivity and creativity.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... compromising in life is not an option. Therefore I firmly believe people need to do what...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... piece of paper if you are unsatisfied. Lets talk about famous personality Elon Mosk...
^^^^
Line 2, column 388, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
... his first investment. He was bankrupt. Still he tried his best the next time even th...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t. Even if he failed the first time, he didnt lose hope because he believed he was le...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...d, Humans are a good learner. You learn better when you are enjoying things. Lets rela...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...rn better when you are enjoying things. Lets relate this with kindergarden classes. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... can learn properly. Similary, we learn better when environment around us is familiar,...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 609, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
.... This would eventually hamper his life.Thus, doing tasks that we donot prefer creat...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2499.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00801603206 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76028517008 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541082164329 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 42.0 20.6003584229 204% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1324586355 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.880952381 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.85842293907 441% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195876467501 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492803723358 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056004725456 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119365715277 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345010239483 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... compromising in life is not an option. Therefore I firmly believe people need to do what...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... piece of paper if you are unsatisfied. Lets talk about famous personality Elon Mosk...
^^^^
Line 2, column 388, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
... his first investment. He was bankrupt. Still he tried his best the next time even th...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t. Even if he failed the first time, he didnt lose hope because he believed he was le...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...d, Humans are a good learner. You learn better when you are enjoying things. Lets rela...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...rn better when you are enjoying things. Lets relate this with kindergarden classes. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... can learn properly. Similary, we learn better when environment around us is familiar,...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 609, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
.... This would eventually hamper his life.Thus, doing tasks that we donot prefer creat...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2499.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00801603206 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76028517008 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541082164329 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 42.0 20.6003584229 204% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1324586355 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.880952381 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.85842293907 441% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195876467501 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492803723358 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056004725456 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119365715277 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345010239483 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.