Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that money is the key of living a happy life. They are ready to sacrifice everything for money, they become so blind after it that they even sacrifice there own happiness. People forget why they need money, the only thing that has taken root in there mind is that they have to earn more and more money so that they could be rich. But, they are not able to notice that there happiness has been left behind. In my view, I definitely disagree with the statement that someone should choose there job according to its pay scale. I feel this way for several reasons, which I intend to explore in the following essay.Firstly, self satisfaction is most important thing in a persons life. If you are not satisfied with your current circumstances then you can not live your life comfortably. For instance, I read this article in a news paper which was about a boy who completed his technical degree from a reputed institute of the country. He even get placed in one of the top leading IT company after his degree but he left his job because he was not satisfied with those environment conditions. He further mentions that it seemed impossible for him to work under other person. So, he started cultivating his farms with some technical help and as a result, he earned a lot of profit by doing so and also, he has satisfaction now.Secondly, If you do job without enjoying it. You won't be able to focus on it completely. Which can lead to loss of both company as well as employees. My real life experience is a compelling example of this, When i was in high school i used to love hockey, but my teacher assigned me other sport because she thought that hockey do not provide better future to girls. I played that game but i did not love it as much i used to like hockey. As a result, i was not able to play it with same enthusiasm and i lost the game to my opponent. But if i would have played hockey, I would have win that match and my future could have been shaped differently.In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion by saying that one should do job which they enjoy and should not compare it with money. I feel this way because self satisfaction is the key to happiness, and one can't give his/her 100% without being passionate about that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42753623188 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54397369137 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51690821256 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9601190181 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262196626407 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688891269753 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573613793584 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262196626407 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.