Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Living at one place for all your life is really difficult for a individual. Discovering new places, meeting new people can help you a lot to deal with all your stress and tensions. Some times psychiatrists too advice there patients to change there work place or habitat for a refreshing mind. As far as I am concerned I feel it is better to go on a trip by oneself rather than carrying a bunch of people with oneself. A number of arguments surround my opinion and I intend to delve into them in the following essay.First of all, while going on trip it should be clear in ones mind that they are going there to enjoy that place to make sweet memories at that place or to discover themselves. Many time people go to mountains for discovering themselves, If they go there with there family or friends they won't ever be able to find what they desire most "peace". Such places are so quiet and beautiful that they are only made to be admired. For instance, Last year i went on tracking with my school, we had one guide and a group of 10 students. The guide was guiding us toward sunset point. I found a point from where sun seemed to be very beautiful and also I was tired so i insisted every one to stop there but no one listened to me. So, i had to go after them and the point was even not beautiful than the previous one. We had same view by walking more. If I would have gone there solo i would have enjoyed that trip even more.Secondly, If you go on a trip with more people you would have to take care of each and every persons choice from there budget to there health conditions. Whereas on a solo trip it is easy as you know about your budget, your strength, you can plan your whole trip according to yourself. My real life experience is a compelling example of this, I was planning a trip for myself so i told about it to one of my friend. She too become excited about the trip and started to plan for herself too. Specifically, She started to make changes in my trip schedule. As I was planning to complete whole trip using trains and local vehicles, She tried to change mode of transportation. She even asked me to change some destinations as they were ''too boring'' according to her. In last she left me with no choice then saying a no to her.
In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion by saying that solo trips are beneficial. This is because one can enjoy beauty of the place, and all activities all by himself rather then thinking about some other person , these are planned according to ones comfort.
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...person , these are planned according to ones comfort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33970276008 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54024981976 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496815286624 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0465410979 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4090909091 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208870775081 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600082775242 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600704429905 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120807307066 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103743035095 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.