Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that people are thriving hard to raise the status of their lives and to earn more money. In this regard, taking out time for recreation is of paramount importance. It is even being said that if food is the first necessity, the recreation is second most. There are different schools of thought, where some reckon to go on trip with a tour guide, others contemplate to enjoy the trip by going alone. If I were asked, I would agree to go by myself on a trip. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my stance is associated with the notion that going on a trip by oneself will save the money of individuals. Since hiring tour guides are not economical as mostly tour guides charge extensively. So if people will arrange their trips by themselves it will provide them a chance to save their money.It is also worth mentioning that their trip will be still extravagant without tour guide's service as most restaurants have booklets that have all the details of exploration and people can still enjoy their trip. By the way of illustration, Five year ago, I had planned to go to Niagra falls by myself. At first I was thinking to hire the tour because that was a new place for me to explore, I even called them, but I was shocked to found the money that they were asking for provision on their services. I planned to save that money and went to Niagra falls, Canada at my own. I was fascinated to find that my hotel manager provided me with informational booklet that had all the details of places where I could go and enjoy. If I had took the services of tour guide, I would have repented that I wasted my money.
The second exquisite rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that it will provide more freedom and more opportunities. To be more specific, when people go alone they arrange their trip by their own will and plan everything according to their own preferences. Most people enjoy their trips if they do not have to come out of their comfort zone. Therefore, when they do not have to make big changes in theit routines, It doubles the fun. My personal opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my personal example. Last year, I had planned to go to Smoky mountain in United States. I enjoyed that trip a lot. This is because I am not an early bird, getting up early in the morning made my day bad. Therefore, I did not take services of the tour because all the tour guides to whom I called were leaving early in the morning. Moreover, they were going to the places which I had already explored. Therefore, going with them had not provided me with the freedom to enjoy my favorite places. I enjoyed that trip by exploring all my favourite places and doing activities that I loved most. My example clearly manifests my preference.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that going on trip by oneself has innumerable advantages. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating. First, It will be more economical. Second, It will provide more fun and freedom.
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... theit routines, It doubles the fun. My personal opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, by and large, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2477.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 543.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56169429098 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58068947145 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460405156538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 784.8 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2942030315 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5666666667 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178793276888 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516799949968 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545445519869 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117725733924 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382377827614 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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