Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travelling is an effective way of relaxing and enjoying landscapes of other regions. people's way of having a journey may heavily influence their feelings and other things related to traveling as well. I believe that visiting places alone is beneficial for me. I feel this way because of my concern about the understanding about a region, personal enjoyment, and financial situation, and I will develop these ideas in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, tourists can understand all aspects of the location that they visit. In fact, guides tend to let people see only positive sides of any places because travelers' enjoyment is essential for them. However, grasping the whole understanding about places is significant. Fortunately, individuals can see all things if they go to other nations alone. As a result, they can experience pleasant and go through unpleasant things comprehensively because no one will disguise abhorrent matters from them. To sum up, if travelers go to unfamiliar nations or cities, they can have the broad understanding about pros and cons about places, which is essential for every journey.
Secondly, people can change their plan in accordance with their wish and appreciation. Things are unpredictable, especially if people are going to places they do not know well. Thus, they may suddenly want to stay at certain places for longer than they planned previously, or leave immediately even if they planned differently. Unfortunately, guides limit these kinds of changes, which means people cannot follow their personal decision. On the one hand, humans can do whatever they want if they travel solely. Consequently, they can appreciate their journey well. Long story short, if individuals travel alone, they will not be limited in choice, so they are able to revel in places to which they go.
Finally, travelers do not have to pay for guides and can choose inexpensive stuff during their travel, which means they can save their money. Most people think that the financial issue related to guides is only payment to guides. Nevertheless, because guides make people afford expensive, luxurious matters, individuals will face the financial burden. By contrast, people will choose cheap things if they want.
In summation, individuals can save their cash because they do not have to pay for guides and stuff that guides choose. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that going to other nations solely is advantageous for me. This is because I can see negative sides of nations, decide to stay longer or leave right away, and reduce the expense by not paying for guides and choosing cheap matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19906323185 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78045427287 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503512880562 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2624885851 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7916666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076603542513 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278626490391 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227259971991 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487965081866 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195091571839 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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