Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is said that it is more convenient to go to the tour with a group and guide. I highly agree with the statement because group and guide help to explore the new places and they can help in any imergency situation.
To begin with, one of the reason for my specific thought is that the group and guide help to discover the new places. The guide and group provide different useful information which help to find any new place more eaisy way. On top of that they generate various new ideas for exploring the place. I have to admit my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. I remember last year when I went to the tour in a forest area with my freinds and guide to complete my thesis, which was the requirment to find the university degree. We
went to Sunderbanch to know the way how the honey was cllected.
That place was very esoteric to explore , mainly the place of honey comb. But with the direction of guide help of my freinds , I finally can discover the the place of the collection of honey. If I had not go to the trip with the freinds and guide, it would have been very difficult for me to explore the honey comb. From this example we can say that group and guide help to know the new place.
Secondly, why I illustrate this specific thought is that group and guide can help in any intricate situation. Because they have different planes and ways, hoe to rescue from any difficult situation. Specially the guide had the training to solve nay difficult situation. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this, it reminds me of the time six month ago when I had to went to the Africa for the official task . I had to meet the bussiness enterprise in an island. That place was very dangerous because there were different uncivilized tribes and ferocious animals. I was really afraid by that situstion. Then my boss adviced me to contracted with a guide and went to the place with other member. At last I could meet the foreign delicate by that instructions. If I had not taken the help from the guide ,I would fail to reach the place. Therefore from this example we have now better understanding the importance of group and guide.
To sum up, from the above stated reasons , I strongly believe thatit is very beneficial to go to the tour with a group and guide. This is because group and guide help to discover the new places and they can help in any exigency condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... That place was very esoteric to explore , mainly the place of honey comb. But wit...
^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he direction of guide help of my freinds , I finally can discover the the place of...
^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... of my freinds , I finally can discover the the place of the collection of honey. If I ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... of my freinds , I finally can discover the the place of the collection of honey. If I ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...f the collection of honey. If I had not go to the trip with the freinds and guide,...
^^
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'solving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: solving
...n. Specially the guide had the training to solve nay difficult situation. My personal ex...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... of this, it reminds me of the time six month ago when I had to went to the Africa fo...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...went to the Africa for the official task . I had to meet the bussiness enterprise ...
^^
Line 7, column 817, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... I had not taken the help from the guide ,I would fail to reach the place. Therefo...
^^
Line 7, column 852, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...guide ,I would fail to reach the place. Therefore from this example we have now better un...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...To sum up, from the above stated reasons , I strongly believe thatit is very benef...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as for, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47640449438 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47654459852 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408988764045 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3492734674 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.68 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20920889146 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678191046922 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677261452751 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130381077413 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722571167569 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... That place was very esoteric to explore , mainly the place of honey comb. But wit...
^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he direction of guide help of my freinds , I finally can discover the the place of...
^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... of my freinds , I finally can discover the the place of the collection of honey. If I ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... of my freinds , I finally can discover the the place of the collection of honey. If I ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...f the collection of honey. If I had not go to the trip with the freinds and guide,...
^^
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'solving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: solving
...n. Specially the guide had the training to solve nay difficult situation. My personal ex...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... of this, it reminds me of the time six month ago when I had to went to the Africa fo...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...went to the Africa for the official task . I had to meet the bussiness enterprise ...
^^
Line 7, column 817, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... I had not taken the help from the guide ,I would fail to reach the place. Therefo...
^^
Line 7, column 852, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...guide ,I would fail to reach the place. Therefore from this example we have now better un...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...To sum up, from the above stated reasons , I strongly believe thatit is very benef...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as for, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47640449438 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47654459852 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408988764045 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3492734674 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.68 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20920889146 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678191046922 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677261452751 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130381077413 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722571167569 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.