Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's modern world, technology play a crucial role in every society. The life without the internet is impossible because it is an indispensable part of everyday life. In other words, people use the internet for their ordinary tasks such as attending to online courses, reading newspapers, and watching films, to name but a few. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among officials about how they can improve citizens' quality of life. Some of authorities believes that they have to invest on improving the internet access as much as possible. others, however, advocate the idea that government should give primacy to other activities such as transportation system. I personally, concur with the former for manifold reasons, among which traffic jam decline and people’s desperate need for the internet are dominant.
It is clear crystal that people prefer to do their work via the internet rather than doing tasks in person. improving the internet access obviates the need for attending to many places such as banks, courses, and work to name but a handful. using the internet saves people’s time and comforts a great deal of work. they do not need allocate a specific time to commute according to their hectic lifestyle. As a consequence, improving the internet access lower traffic jam in the city, so it does not need to adopt specific policies to improve public transportation. For example, I have not gone to bank since 5 years ago because I do all my work such as paying bills, taxations, and tolls and transferring money from my account by the internet. it is clearly demonstrates that the internet improvement have preference than public transportation for both government and citizens.
Secondly, people have a desperate need to the internet for updating their information. they cannot live without the internet. The majority of the society have to spend a lot of time on searching on the internet, so they rely highly on the internet. many students have to do researches every day. Most people have to being up-to-date to be prosperous in their job. The more high speed internet is accessible, the more satisfied people are. By improving the internet, they can do their work fast and allocate more time enjoying their families' company.
All in all, I really believe that government should invest in improving the internet access on the ground that high-speed internet access reduces commuting in the city and facilitate people's commonplace tasks. Hence, should government enhance the internet status, they will attain people's contentment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17703349282 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8565765406 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507177033493 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2208308967 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0869565217 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1739130435 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95652173913 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266833823921 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830556621869 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619988000279 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173643683841 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703799863239 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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