Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the year dot, knowing about our social events has been one of the most precious gifts that living together has bestowed upon human beings. However, the source of news should be reliable and true. Finding excellent sources has become a crucial issue for people, some of which are of the opinion that people should know what happens around the world, while other people believe that it is not necessary to follow the news which is unlikely to affect our daily life. I subscribe to the first group rather than the second one for quite a few reasons, two substantial ones of which will be elaborated upon hereunder.
First, nowadays, because of the development of technologies and improvements in communication areas, our world has become so complex, and any person can find any news about the very far distance of the world. If we consider today’s world as a complex system, we can know that our measures affect not only our near environment but also the beyond of the world. As a result, knowing about any issue is so important. For instance, polluting the air and increasing the temperature of the world are two of the most important issues which we should notice them. These phenomena affect all organisms which are living in the hum earth, and its bad consequences will threat all living creatures in the world. On the other hand, noticing only the price of goods or unimportant issues which affect the short period of our lives is not a logical choice.
Second, every one of us has a smartphone which opens us bombards of news, and a variety of sources of news open us a perspective to the accuracy of news. Thus, we are able to analyze the news in a proper manner. Most of the personal or public pages on Instagram, Facebook, and Twitter, to a few but a handful present us a huge amount of information, but it is necessary to choose a proper source of news, and each news is not reliable. By criticizing the news, we can improve our knowledge about analyzing the news. Quite a few sources are not independent, and they are dependent on some political parties. The media which depend on political parties or specific people always use people’s emotional movements for their personal purposes. For instance, in every election season, most of the politicians try to establish campaigns for advertising themselves to collecting people’s elections, and they spend a huge amount of money for their goals, and it causes misleading many people. As a result, most of the news might be gossip, and it affects our personal or social lives badly. Therefore, by choosing many sources, if any source deprives us of a proper way, we can easily extract the real news.
In conclusion, by noticing the complexity of our lives and its effects, and improving our criticizing abilities, we can improve knowledge about our lives, we all know surely in a system like our world, anything affects other things, and we should broad our knowledge in personal and social lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2458.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80078125 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63701387237 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470703125 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1189400975 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11487361056 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390247256475 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376680126645 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799224407432 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423748866961 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.