Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Events around the world, unlikely to affect people's daily life for most time, triggers heated discussion over whether people are supposed to know these events. These news, in some people's view, are far from us and have little influence on our daily life, so we should not waste time to know. On the contrary, my perspective is that knowing about events happening in another countrys are significant and necessary for the following reasons.
First, never should we ignore that reading or listening some interesting events or storys around the world are able to help people get relaxed and release stress. Nowadays people are quite busy and suffer from pressure stemming from personal and professional life. For example, students have to allocate most of their time to attending classes and preparing for the exams, and thus they are almost stressed out. As a result, during their spare time, if they choose to read some news about some poeple such as their favoriate singer or basketball player, they will temporarily get distracted from their hectic school life and take a break for a while. As a result, they may pay more attention to their school work after reading these events.
Besides, the events happened in other nations will also broaden people's horizons, which will benefit people in the future. By getting some information about the events happened countrys which have different culture background, people will obtain a well-rounded knowledge about a new country. For example, from the news about how Chinese people celebrate their Spring Festival, people will begin to understand some feature of Chinese culture, such as the pursue of happiness and health. Consequently, if they come to China or meet with Chinese people in the future, they are more likely to know what Chinese people like and know how to get along with Chinese people.
Finally, although events happen in different country will not affect our daily life in a straightforward way, it may affect our life in the future or exert influence indirectly. Therefore, it is still sensible for people to keep eyes on these news. For instance, the news about some technology break through may not influence our like in the short run, but it may change our future life. Students are able to use this news to make some important decision, like choosing major.
In conclusion, people should attach more significance to knowing about worldwide news because it can help people feel entertained, expand horizon and help make decisions in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'These newses'?
Suggestion: This news; These newses
...ople are supposed to know these events. These news, in some peoples view, are far from us ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s have to allocate most of their time to attending classes and preparing for the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ey are almost stressed out. As a result, during their spare time, if they choose ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ome feature of Chinese culture, such as the pursue of happiness and health. Consequently, ...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a straightforward way" with adverb for "straightforward"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... country will not affect our daily life in a straightforward way, it may affect our life in the future o...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...ill sensible for people to keep eyes on these news. For instance, the news about some tech...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... it may change our future life. Students are able to use this news to make some i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0843373494 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48762242926 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50843373494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2993942548 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.117647059 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5294117647 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192629120187 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719721260925 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503875513759 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114253195487 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531705337082 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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