Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career job would lead to a secure, successful future. (TPO39-Task2)
Career, one of the important elements in people's lives, has been valued and triggered heated discussion. It is much easier, in some people's view, to figure out what kind of job will lead to success in the future. In contrast, my perspective is that we can easily identify what type of career will be more possible to succeed in the modern time, due to the convenience of getting information.
To begin with, compared with the past time, nowadays people are more likely to know what kind of vocation will lead to a successful future, by obtaining information from their friends in various fields. Nowadays, people's friends work in more fields than decades ago, providing comprehensive information about a certain career. With the process of urbanization, more and more people travel to other city and locate jobs in different fields, such as education, financial system, or government. People are able to exchange their perspectives about their job with their friends. As a result, people will have a better understanding of different careers and easily figure out what type of career will lead to a successful future. This, however, can not happen in the past because people's friend circle may have been restricted to a small area where people only work for a few occupations.
In addition, never should we ignore the advent of the internet lowers the cost we afford in order to know a career's future comprehensively. Nowadays, it is convenient for people to search for certain information on the search engine. By typing in the queries about a profession, people will be presented with assorted information about that job immediately, including the advantages and disadvantages, news, or stories. We can also read other people's feelings on social media and forums, which can help us know other workers' life. This kind of information will provide people with access to diverse aspects of this career, helping them evaluate whether this job would lead to a secure and successful future. However, people in the past would find it laborious to obtain such information about a career, making it impossible to identify the future of this job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...on. To begin with, compared with the past time, nowadays people are more likely to kno...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir job with their friends. As a result, people will have a better understanding ...
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Line 7, column 518, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...nd forums, which can help us know other workers life. This kind of information will pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08474576271 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79001104646 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511299435028 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4454823951 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214941175001 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830748884091 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632944217423 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164357821223 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107223069651 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.