Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

By and large, it is established beyond doubt that human beings are curious to know about everything during their life spans especially about events happening around them. A controversial question which is often raised in this area is whether people consider knowing events that have not any impacts on their daily life or not. Although some people tend to believe individuals do not care about the irrelevant news and information to their daily life, in my opinion, people are extremely eager to pay attention to both relevant and irrelevant events and news for a couple of reasons. In what follows, I will try to provide cogent reasons to support my statement.

First and foremost, knowing about everything happening around a world would be a strong way to broaden the minds of adults. It goes without saying that the more information about every happen and incidents, individuals have, the more knowledge and wisdom can get in order to use them in their behavioral in front of others. Therefore, their mind is going to extend which is useful for their communication skills in society. To illustrate, international news not only contains different cultures from different countries but also includes a variety of social manners and languages. By aware of a variety of information, people come across cultural understanding that is helpful for setting their minds and thoughts more flexible and adaptable. As a result, when they encounter a foreigner or go abroad and face culture diversity, they can adapt themselves easily and behave with people in the best way. For this reason, I strongly believe that people pay attention to the happens, whether relevant to their life or not.

Another explanation for my point of view rests on the fact that many children can get benefit from other young people living wealthy with fantasy equipment which is obtained without any difficulties. Without a doubt, this group of people does not know how rich they are and how easy and fast they can gain to everything that they wish. However, if they informed about others' life and know about their harsh situations, they tend to appreciate all they have and try to share this prestige life with poor children. As a case in point, when young children see some news about poor children in Africa suffering from drought and feminine, they will be awake how fabulous they are living and start denoting their things or even saving money to help them. Hence, poor children can get this opportunity to have better lives and moments. if young people do not care about irrelevant news and ineffective happens all around the world, not only they still unconscious about their life stage, but also those poor children could not experience a better life.

All in all, it is important for all individuals to be aware of all around the world for having a broaden minds and better interaction with foreigners and being appreciated about their having and helping poor children around the world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 830, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...unity to have better lives and moments. if young people do not care about irreleva...
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Line 13, column 96, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ware of all around the world for having a broaden minds and better interaction with forei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, as a result, by and large, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2483.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99597585513 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58349317085 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486921529175 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3238326947 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.944444444 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6111111111 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213017719025 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076008279631 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551400365123 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136797547819 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335278913009 0.0645574589148 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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