Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a lot of different occasions happening all around the world and they introduce different cultures. But, personally, I think there isn't a need to know all about these events. Honestly, there not affective on people's life quality, who is live on the other side of the world. Moreover, they are mostly happening for fun in their special area and perhaps they are not even interesting for other cultures. I will illustrate my reason in the following essay.
To begin with, most of these events are for a reason or introducing something great and perfect, maybe, in that area or culture. But, despite this, people have a lot to deal with these days; therefore, there is no need to spend time searching and learning about events, those are happening thousands of miles away.
Secondly, These occasions are interesting for local people not for individuals. To give an illustration, I could share one of my personal experiences. I remember earlier, when I was a child, the age that all people are curious about everything, we were on a trip to a neighbor country. What I was expected back then was magical and amazing entertainment or special occasions; Unfortunately, what I faced there was culture and some activities that not even understandable. Despite my experience there was beautiful, but not for me, who was from a culture that had a huge contrast with those events.
To sum up, it isn't essential to know about all events that happening around the world. They are not effective and they are just for entertainment and most of the time there are not interesting for people with different behaviors and habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8768115942 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83750943212 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.915471912 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1428571429 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174990059813 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687731356347 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545167305536 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125926299671 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715609190756 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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