Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believes that art have not valuable impact on society, But, personally, contemplate that, art has, as much as, impact that sports have on a society. Sure athlets give proud to a comunity, But the artists feed the society's soal, thus they need enough wealth, as well. I think this way for two reasons that, I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, Art is a notrotion food for the people souls. Accordingly, The artist need enough materials to sustain thei art, and the government should motivate the artists to work and invent new masterpeaces. Moreover, I know that athletics are important, as well and they are the country'd proud, But, they are a great deal for a part of the individuals not hundred percent of the people, Furthermore, there are people, who interested in art and different places, which they can spend time in it and enjoy their favorites. Therefore governments should pay attention to both sides and try to gain both groups satisfaction.
Secondly, Spend the same wealth on art areas that aare spending on sports can be beneficials for country the same, perhaps, more. For intance, when a country has a lots of masterpeaces in the museums or lots of historical and ancient locations; In a consequence, It will have a myriad of tourists. Moreover, when the country turn to a tourism spot, It will gain a lots of wealth and they other countries around it wants to be a international brige for that country. Thus, art can help the economy of the society, as well.
Thirdly, When a country is active in artistic areas, there will be investments for their arts. If we evaluate the situation, this can engender a national connection and help the country to get reach. Thus, art can effect on political areas, too.
In conclusion, pay attention to art, as much as, the sports areas get, can be beneficial for governments and country considerably. It can affect on turism and national connection, as well. Thus, it can be a lucrative investment on art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79651162791 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77568028195 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2698678772 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0588235294 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894480125861 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330999790248 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254161253906 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523080168681 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273770888634 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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