Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a doubt, one of the most important governments' duties is to pay attention to people's favorable activities. someones believe that providing suitable art platforms is more important than in support of sports and athletics. Personally, I disagree with this argument. In my opinion, governments should pay more attention to sports than art. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, during the last decades, world sports competitions have shown the importance of sports activities for individuals' lives. Sports activities are real jobs for many people. So, governments should devote enough budget to improving their situation. For example, when I was a young student my goal was that be a teacher in the future. One summer, our basketball coach encourages me to join to basketball team just for having an enjoyable time with my friends but they find me talented in sport and tried to send me to the main team of our city. That happen changed my future route and now after years, I am studying as a basketball coaching major. I would not have such interesting life if my school had not spent money on the sports teams.
Secondly, sports are more important than art for each country. Governments should spend enough money for their sports teams to participate in international competitions because their results have effects on political and economical relations between countries. For instance, participating in world sports competitions lead athletics to be well known in the International arena and countries make interactions together for employing other countries' athletics.
In conclusion, governments should spend more money in support of sports teams than in support of arts. This is because sports have influence on people's lives. Also, this is because the sport can affect the political situation of countries therefore it is more important than arts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Someones
...ention to peoples favorable activities. someones believe that providing suitable art pla...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...r results have effects on political and economical relations between countries. For instan...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...teractions together for employing other countries athletics. In conclusion, governments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20388349515 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88197468985 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.516832155 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193512236872 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749722034582 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100938720434 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143936151814 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745960276702 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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