Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Last try:05/25/2020 17:56
these days people, Specially young people care about there health and the subjects that improve their ability to learning. Students are one group of these young people. Thus, universities and colleges need to spend, as much as, money for sports equipment and social activities, that they spend on classes and libraries. One other point is, this quality and equipments in a university or college can be beneficial, too. I believe in these because of reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
The first reason that I think this is something essential is that; When students exercising and doing sports even just half an hour every day, It helps their brain works better, They can learn and analyze the data and information with details. Thus, From students feedback, we can see how much sports are effective in brain works.
Another reason that I want to mention is, I personally believe that students who just studying and never have other activities besides there schools, These groups have an unsocial personality most of the time. It can be effective in their personal life and their situation in classes or even, maybe, someday it just makes them tired. Why it can be? I read about this topic on lots of websites, having a social life and other activities besides classes and lessons; Help to be more energetic and be more interested in different lessons. Therefore, I think social activities are, as important as, classes.
Besides these positive effects for students, this quality can be beneficial for the university and college, too. Have a big sports complex and some social activities for students, can show to parents and students that, this place cares about the students and their quality of social life and their health besides their lessons and grades. Thus it can just give these universities and colleges a big credit actually.
In conclusion, universities and colleges should spend, as much money, on sports equipment and social activities, that they spend on their classes and libraries. Because these subjects are work together and will be helpful for students and university/ college, too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07714285714 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55016766155 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488571428571 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2387411477 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.529411765 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162324503768 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591874487751 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433194049904 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103225276656 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138582694986 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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