Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
In modern century everyone are trying hard to be successful in their career or different areas. Personally, I believe that half of people’s success is their luck. Indeed, There are amount of experiences in people’s life, which they can explain to all. I feel this way for two main reason, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, thesedays all the individual trying far too hard for being successful and achive their goals. But, the luck is important, as well. To illustrate more, There are lots of people out there, who is explore for a career and they aren’t able to find one, because they don’t have any friends or relatives with strong tarithory to give them a spot in a organization or even a little office. My own experience is a example of this situation. When I searched for job earlier this year, I improved my resume and took some classes for being skilled in my own major. After searching for few months, I got an interview in an engineering company and I had every right to get that spot, But abruply the head of the company’s friends come in and got the job very simple without any background. That was just one out of the thousends of samples of using the people’s influce in similar situations.
Secondly, Another reason that I think luck is fifty percent of the people’s success is that, there are milions people out there young or old with different culture, who is fighting for different thing like food supply, job and even life, In addition to the former group, there are lots of people, who is just worry about the vation times which is shorter this year or the weekend party. Accordingly to last statements, luck is the key of success of these individuals, obviously. For instance, We can compare the people in Africa or Asia to the people, who live in America or Europe. Significantly, there are lots of consideable differences in their primary needs. According to last statement, If the former, lived in other location, that can change their lifes and helps them to achive their goals and be successful. Therefore, I faith in luck and the benefits, which it has in peoples success.
In conclusion, luck is fifty or perhaps more percents of the people success in my vision. If people try with all their power at the end they need some luck, as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... strong tarithory to give them a spot in a organization or even a little office. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68058968059 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59237629466 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535626535627 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0686828093 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.263157895 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215775513619 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733492984558 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433817989309 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147973635324 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237366361366 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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