Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
In the modern century, everyone is trying hard to be successful in their career or in different areas. Personally, I believe that half of the people’s success is their luck. Indeed, there are amount of experiences in people’s lives, which they can explain to all. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, these days all the individuals trying far too hard for being successful and achieve their goals. But, luck is important, as well. To illustrate more, There are lots of people out there, who are exploring for a career and they aren’t able to find one because they don’t have any friends or relatives with the strong authority to give them a spot in an organization or even a little office. My own experience is an example of this situation. When I searched for a job earlier this year, I improved my resume and took some classes for being skilled in my own major. After searching for few months, I got an interview in an engineering company and I had every right to get that spot, But abruptly the head of the company’s friends come in and got the job very simple without any background. That was just one out of the thousands of samples of using the people’s influence in similar situations.
Secondly, Another reason that I think luck is fifty percent of the people’s success is that there are millions of people out there young or old with a different culture, who is fighting for a different thing like food supply, job, and even life, In addition to the former group, there are lots of people, who is just worry about the vacation times which is shorter this year or the weekend party. Accordingly, to last statements, luck is the key to the success of these individuals, obviously. For instance, We can compare the people in Africa or Asia to the people, who live in America or Europe. Significantly, there are lots of considerable differences in their primary needs. According to the last statement, If the former, lived in another location, that can change their lives and helps them to achieve their goals and be successful. Therefore, I faith in luck and the benefits, which it has in people's success.
In conclusion, luck is fifty or perhaps more percent of the people's success in my vision. If people try with all their power in the end they need some luck, as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...is fifty or perhaps more percent of the peoples success in my vision. If people try wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65467625899 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62803697357 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.2631085834 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.157894737 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209662711117 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716109393292 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449520209558 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143367250637 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234419037366 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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