Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Should we concern the global issues and news even though they seemed to have nothing to do with us? I agree with that. Many opportunities hide in those international incidents so as the crisis. More over, as a part of the world, every one of has the responsibility to pay attention on the international affairs.
Potential chances are often hide in the international trend. For example, environmental awareness is highly recommended in many countries. It is harmless for a businessperson who does not care about eco-friendly at all. While people who have environmentally conscious tend to search daily supplies which can be used repeatedly. If the businessperson is shrewd enough, he can catch the chance to take his career to the next level.
Crisis is concealed in significant international affairs. Covid-19 is a classic instance. When the atypical pneumonia broke out in China, very few countries notice that they should prepared some proper anti-epidemic measures and store enough food and daily supplies for possible epidemic. Ignorance brought the heavy loss in numerous aspects including shortage of tissue, global trade stopped, stock market crash and so on. If people noted the warning from some reliable countries like Taiwan, the damage caused by Covid-19 can be reduced much more than now.
Living in this modern world, the transportation of messages is faster than ever. Human beings can get news from all over the world without going out home. The distance between different lands is shorten by technology. It is needed to absorb the important news occurs in the world since the relationship between countries is closer as our neighbors live next door, what had happened at them can happened again at us. It is better that we do some research and prevention beforehand.
Chances and risks are everywhere in the global events and it is our duty to put focus on those issues happened around us. As the technology improves fast, the importance of concern on international affairs cannot be emphasized more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oes not care about eco-friendly at all. While people who have environmentally conscio...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'shortened'.
Suggestion: shortened
...The distance between different lands is shorten by technology. It is needed to absorb t...
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Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...elationship between countries is closer as our neighbors live next door, what had ...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...ext door, what had happened at them can happened again at us. It is better that we do so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15454545455 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93943298943 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7633738361 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2380952381 5.45110844103 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11600872688 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309306993339 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366841449134 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645808180421 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324344900073 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.