Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Will there be more cars than today after twenty years? I agree with it for three reasons. Albeit the gasoline is limited now, the future cars can use electric as their energy which can decrease the price as the techniques is improving. Moreover, there can have cars which are able to fly on the sky as airplanes. People will tend to purchase individual vehicle instead of taking public transportation for more flexible trip.

Opponents can rebut the cars will increase than today for the energy like gasoline is fluctuating. However, there are more resources can replace gasoline like wind power, solar energy, and electric energy and so on. The speed of the improving of technology is infinite. Finite Gasoline cannot be an obstacle for buying and using cars in the future for sure.

As the former opinion, we cannot imagine the future technology. A hundred years ago, people can expect a faster horse instead of a car. The future cars' functions and structures can be out of our imaginations. Cars can fly on the sky and dive into the sea are possible. As the techniques are boosting, the price can be drop down simultaneously. Those benefits can definitely attract more people to purchase.

The individual trip and secret view-spots are more and more popular now. Because the usual tourist-spots are normal and not special. People like to take adventures and create uncommon experience especially for the young people. To seek secret and unfamiliar view-spots they need personal vehicles. The cars can be the best choice undoubtedly.

The future trend tend to promote people to buy cars for better mobility, newer technology, and lower price. Without the shortage of gasoline since the future vehicles do not depend on it fully. There will have more cars than today in the near future undeniable.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01661129568 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63795325286 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0798347212 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.652173913 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0869565217 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13043478261 5.45110844103 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171932820102 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583032052289 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734050288522 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105682933377 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586870575228 0.0645574589148 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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