Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for extended hours rather than have a position where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, there is a big step forward in society's development, which is people do not need to work more in the office. Instead, they can develop up-to-date skills to enhance the productivity of the work. Personally, I believe that it is happier if we only work five days a week for shorter hours rather than in three days with longer hours. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, every people have a limitation in concentration during the workday. Additionally, if people work in office longer, they could probably lose their focus in work time. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I worked for an electric company two years ago. They announced a policy that engineers can work more than eight hours a day to the night so that workers can take one more day off. We initially happy about that, so almost engineer team members chose to work more time and take one day off. However, we just did that in two weeks, because all team members were too tired with this schedule. Thus, our jobs were not complete in time, and the company retracts the policy.
Secondly, working in a shorter time in the day can increase the free time in the night to hang out with friends as well as spend time for family. To be more specific, people who go to work from the morning to the late-night can not have time to speed for family. When they come back from work, their wife and kids are going to bed, so they can not talk to them and share the exciting story in their workday together. More importantly, having diner with family or hanging out with friends usually happens at night, which can not occur if they work late. This time is the opportunity to enhance the relationship between family members or friends. Accordingly, working late will negatively affect the social life of workers.
Moreover, taking days off too much can make people lazier at the beginning of next week. For instance, I had four days off in the national holiday last month. I spend this time with my family on a long trip. It took a lot of my energy and made me tired when I came back to work on Monday morning. My productivity in the next week enormously decreases. As a result, I did not finish my jobs in the week in time.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that it much better to work in short hours. This is because it helps increase the focus on day work, spend time at night for family and friends, and get ready in the next week efficiently.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in short, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51185770751 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39806397695 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48023715415 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3754883221 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.724137931 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4482758621 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34482758621 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454001947383 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114872741507 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138909058671 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260172254754 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188798253306 0.0645574589148 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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