Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Honestly speaking, both choices have their own advantages and disadvantages. people will have totally different ideas on how to choose from these two options. From my perspective, I prefer to have a job where I work five days a week for shorter hours.
First of all, what I am concerned is that the efficiency declines as time we spend in work increases in a day. The most efficient time we can have a day is limited. if I work five days, the jobs I can do could be much greater than that I work three days, and the consequences could be much better.
Additionally, to work effectively, people need time to refresh their mind. Long time spent in one thing could make people feel bored and unconcentrated. Thus, both the employers and the employees will not be happy to see such situation. working five days a week means people have more time to have breaks between two days, both efficiency and happiness could increase.
what's more, such choice could make my plans of a week more flexible. Thinking about a man who works three days a week for longer hours, it means he will be stuck in his works and have little free time to spare a week. His schedule also needs to be fit in his work time. Contrary to such situation, working five days for shorter time stands for more free time a day. people could use it to work out, meet food and so on, which really fascinates me.
To be honest, working three days a week has its own advantage. working for longer time a day could make up for the distracted time everyone would have. And it means four free days a week which could totally means a small vacation!
As what I said, each choice is good, and working five days attracts me more. if I have the opportunity to choose my work time, I world like to select this one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, honestly, if, really, so, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4128440367 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41854073383 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498470948012 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5622728801 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9473684211 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327276621903 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121710640264 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949917248247 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20238010713 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502884223344 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.