do you agree or disagree with the following statement? it is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
That we have enough time during day plays an important role in our life is an undeniable fact. should we realize the advantages of working partially in our life, we will ponder over it much more scrupulously. this issue has recently been the topic of debate among sociologists.
I believe that if I have a job five days a week for shorter hours, I will feel better than working three days a week for long hours, and these are my justification, to begin with, I had a friend was that he worked some days a week for a long time. when his boy was burned he couldn't see her boy because he worked that day. therefore he said me working for a long time is very terrible, the second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising the fact that we need to consume some of our time with our family and have fun. therefore, we should be with friends and our children every day. the last but not the least working long time in a day make week our communication with others and we can not have the good friend.
having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective because I believe that everything has two sides as well, whenever we work every day, we can't go journey weekend. therefore I refuse my friends suggestion for journey every week and it is very horrible for me.
by taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. underestimating the advantages of working for short hours in our life is not logical. attending to this issue meticulously contributes to work short time, and can improve several aspects of our life. therefore I prefer to work for a short time every day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51960784314 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6386394791 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0063772004 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300440122716 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110282634341 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106150807106 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166538693584 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10256751274 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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