Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship is considered as the strongest bond in the entire world and friends are acknowledged as a family member. However, I personally believe that establishing a relationship with new people is a good thing. You can not live your life by maintaining a relationship with individuals you know since your childhood or for a long time. Therefore, I will explore two reasons to support my answer in the following essay.
First, I think making new friends allows you to know new people. When you meet new people you can know their culture or language which would be entirely different than yours. In addition, You can not live your life by just knowing the people around you. For instance, I would like to mention my own incident. I have a friend from Germany, I talk to him regularly and I told him that I want to learn his language so he helped me and that’s how I learned the German language. I am not fluent in it but I can understand words and sentences. At present, I am applying to German universities to pursue masters. So my little knowledge in the German language would help me there. I can get what they are talking about or even saying to me. It would help me to get a job there.
Second, when you are working in a company or you have your own business, meeting new people would be beneficial to make business contacts and relationships with the people who are working in the company or in an organization or they can be an individual who owns a business. As a result, you can spread your business or they can buy the advertisement of your company. Either way, it is a good thing and can have a positive impact on your business. For example, I read a biography of a famous entrepreneur. When he was struggling to get a job he met a person who was about to open his own business and he was searching for the person who can be hard working and has an ability to make the profit out of the business by working hard. So, they become partners and after many years he became a successful entrepreneur.
Finally, I think becoming friends with an individual can be very helpful. They can help you in your study or work. I would like to give a compelling example of myself. When I was in the first semester of my college, I was having a tough time understanding the lessons taught in the class. So, I asked one of my classmates to help me. Although he was totally stranger to me, he helped me out.
In conclusion, I would like to say that making a new friend can be beneficial. When you making new friends, you are actually opening the new ways and paths to do certain things or learn something new or have the opportunity to do to something effective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...guage which would be entirely different than yours. In addition, You can not live yo...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... can not live your life by just knowing the people around you. For instance, I would like to mention ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... or they can be an individual who owns a business. As a result, you can spread yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, talking about, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4399185336 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73713751979 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456211812627 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.123701336 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8571428571 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5357142857 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214162465517 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610818503076 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651376861735 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146023212211 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062385116012 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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