Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It has been a rising debate over whether the government should subsidize Internet access or public transportation. There are various opinions. For some people, it is important to improve Internet access, because there are more and more people using the Internet. On the other hand, some argue that public transportation plays a fundamental role in people’ life. I, myself, incline to the first point by giving the following reasons.
First of all, the internet contributes to the study of all the students by accessing so much information. Nowadays, there are more and more students go to class with laptops or other electronic devices for recording and note-taking. That would be a problem if there is no good Internet access. Take me as an example, I usually go to class with my smartphone that is the equivalent of a heavy notebook and textbook. Teachers would use their presentations on the class. And I can only use my cell phone to take notes instead of carrying my textbook. Because there are serval classes I need to have one day, it would be a relief for me to take just a cellphone. And if there is no such good Internet access, I cannot connect to the Internet to check out some information I need. Therefore, it is really important for governments to improve Internet access.
Secondly, Internet access changes the way people work. With better Internet access, many people can choose to work at home. They do not need to go to the office. Therefore, there is no more traffic jam. What's more, that would save a lot of money for the companies and employees. People can use this sum of money to do what they like, such as spending more money on studying a new skill or traveling abroad.
Thirdly, Internet access will stimulate other areas. If connecting to the Internet become faster, that would make a big change in many fields such as delivering, online shopping, long-distance class. For example, Taobao, the biggest online shop in China. Every year, there are a lot of customers purchase various goods on Taobao. The reason behind this phenomenon is better Internet access, which has been contributed to the infrastructures by the Chinese government. If the netizen cannot use the computer or smartphone anywhere and anytime, that would not be possible for Taobao to make such a huge profit.
In conclusion, it is necessary for governments to spend money to improve Internet access.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90196078431 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78822478005 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497549019608 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1467823299 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0740740741 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3172766903 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899197197777 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927722050995 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21743046755 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850558784084 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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