DO you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the universe that we are living together, there are harsh moments that we need friends to rely on and tell our problems tothem. Therefore, we conclude that having friends is very important for us in our social life. The vital question which comes to the mind is that it is good to find new friend or keep the old ones. my point of view is that keep the old friend have more good impacts than make new relationships on us. I will clarify my opinion in the following passage.
For the first and the main reason, old friends are the peoples who know you for the long period of time and they understand you more than any new person. also, you had extremely good moments with them which you can remind and make laugh at them when you get together. As my personal experience, I have 3 friends since high school that we get together each month and have fun together and we always tell the stories which we had in high school and the memories about mortification of the teacher and fights which we had. Hence old friends can share their new memories more than the new friends and they are not shy or embarressed from each other.
For the second and the final reason, due to the long term of knowing and communicating with the your old friends, you identified their characterestics very well and know how much capacity they have to humiliate or telling a secret to them.that's all because of the long period of time that you are together with each other in addition, level of trusts will emerged. For instance, I know some people which they have old relations which endure about several decades since their childhood until their elderhood. they rely on each in each single matter of their life. Moreover they kept their secrets and also they come to help each other when they get in trouble and have problems in their life.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that keeping old friend will have dominant consequences which noticeably will effect our future. The most crucial reason imposed are in the term of identification of their personality after long period of time, trust levels appear. also for having more time expending together, potentially they can make more fun together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67010309278 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39688366023 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466494845361 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7684034242 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21820222414 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861218799104 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731038490246 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146628060113 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553740531083 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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