Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
We are living in a complex world, Information Age. In this era where knowledge is the key to survival, there are many students who hold the idea that learning many facts as much as possible might be beneficial for them. Personally, I believe that having a whole understanding of ideas and concepts might broaden their view about what is happening around. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, ideas an concepts are important in formal education. In other words, when students are not able to learn the ideas and concepts behind the education, they won`t be apt to have fully understanding about facts. An example of mine might help to illustrate that. When I was in University, physic subject was my weakness and I could not understand the concepts at all. Every time that I was requested to solve a physic problem, I used to look at resolution before I start to work on it. As you can see, missing basic ideas and concepts gave me an insecurity to solve physic problems.
Secondly, the propose of schools is to prepare students for full participation in society. To hold a job and be part of community, learners need ideas and concepts even more than they need facts. For example, if someone studies to become a petroleum engineer, it is not enough to learn where the oil is. Petroleum engineers should have an idea of what it feels like to be in a platform and all the variable, responsibility and safety that are involved in this field before they can actually be trusted to work with that.
To sum it up, skills and concepts are the most important thing a student must learn so they might have a better understanding about facts. Not only because a fully comprehension of ideas and concepts might be essential during their school life but it also will be good in their insertion in society.
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...o solve physic problems. Secondly, the propose of schools is to prepare students for f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.726443769 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67454060894 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2236856786 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1875 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272816808632 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863366019216 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049146235853 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160220942994 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019282284389 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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