Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to choose friends that can have fun with you than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.
In this modern era, one of the most dominant aspect of life is friendship. People are not capable to choose their family, however, they choose their friend by themselves. Therefore, it become important how do anybody want to communicate with their friends. The controversial question which arises here is whether is it more important to choose friends that satisfy your entertainment aspect of life than to choose friends that will help you when you need them. I personally contend that the fun aspect is more important. In what follows, I will try to provide some reason s to support my statement.
First and foremost, nowadays, world become so complicated in a way that have influence on anything in people’s life especially in their rapport. Anybody are struggling with their personal life and, do not have sufficient time to help others lives. Therefore, it is not appropriate to expect friends to help us when we need them. As a supportive case to my point, there was a research in one of the west university about the longevity of friendship which involve about 2000 people. The conclusion has shown that, people who does not choose their friend to helping their needs last efficiently more than people choose their friend in a way to answer their help.
The other equally important reason is that today; people need more intimacy in their life. Through this modern technology and this robotic lie, people need someone to have fun with and, get relieved about their problem for few hours when they are spending with their friend. There is always a solution to any kind of needs through websites, agencies, etc., therefore people should nor waste of their time with each other with a helper instead of having a lot of fun. I delve to a personal experience to support my statement. Whenever I took a look at people in my life, there are always a few ones that their friendship with me last for so many years and whenever I pay more attention to it, I understand that they are one’s whim I spend my time with them having fun.
In conclusion, I would like to consider the point that, people face a lot of problems in their life, therefore, the best and most way to ignore them for some hours is to have a friend who can laugh at problems with. Besides, once a philosopher said: “friends that you can have fun with are a dominant choice to share your needs to them.”
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...eir friend by themselves. Therefore, it become important how do anybody want to commun...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... supportive case to my point, there was a research in one of the west university about the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71052631579 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54123859411 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476076555024 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5144909276 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.388888889 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379651454553 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126254965766 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119732919325 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265886085631 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927506614013 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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