Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to choose friends that can have fun with you than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.
Throughout history, friendship has played an important role in people’s lives. People always have been trying to choose friends during their lives. It goes without saying that the friends people choose affect their lives and characteristics. In this regard, some people possess the conviction that it is more significant to choose friends that can have fun with you. Nevertheless, others may subscribe to the idea that choosing friends who help you in time of a crisis is a better idea. I am of the opinion that it is a more prudent course of action to choose friends who are always ready to help you. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
First and foremost, life is full of unplanned situations, which means people may face issues that cannot be solved in solitude. To put it another way, owing to the complexities of modern life and society, people are confronting difficult and challenging problems in their every day lives. It is axiomatic that having friends who can help in these circumstances affect people’s lives and also help them to throw their stresses away. My own experience is a case in point. Approximately two years ago, because of my sedentary lifestyle, I was diagnosed with the heart disease, and as my doctor mentioned, I should have had a heart surgery as soon as possible. Unfortunately, I did not have enough money to afford the cost of surgery, so I decided asking my friends to lend some money to me. Afterward, they helped me and provided me with sufficient amount of money. Had I not had such friends, I would not have been able to afford the surgery.
The second noteworthy reason to be mentioned is that having these types of friends will help people to boost their self-confidence and earn enough courage to be achieve their goals. To put it simply, the more people’s friends are ready to help them in unfavorable situations, the more people will have bravery to take different risks. Therefore, they will have more motivation and will try so hard that they will achieve their goals. In the research conducted in my country in 2020, the factors that affected people’s prosperity in their businesses were analyzed. The results revealed that the most important factor was the number of the friends who help people when they need them. These prosperous people who took part in this study mentioned that their friends were always available when they needed them, so they have enough self-confident to take risks and fight for their goals. These people did not have any stress when they faced difficulties, nor did they afraid of embrace different challenges.
The aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that having friends who are available when you need them is very valuable asset because nowadays life is full of unplanned emergencies, and not all problems can be solved individually. Moreover, friends who help people always, will give people enough self-confidence and courage to take risks when it is due. In other words, not only do these friends help people, but also they give them impetus to endeavor harder to achieve their goals. It is suggested that people take into account their friends’ personality traits when they want choose them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
...mportant role in people’s lives. People always have been trying to choose friends during their l...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to affect'
Suggestion: to affect
...t saying that the friends people choose affect their lives and characteristics. In thi...
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Line 3, column 960, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
...s when they faced difficulties, nor did they afraid of embrace different challenges. The a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.0286738351 254% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2676.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94639556377 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72405234618 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458410351201 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 805.5 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2838679689 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8076923077 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323509878048 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103059797408 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929064047288 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231980977027 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114176402323 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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