Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to choose friends that can have fun with you than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.
Friendship is one of the principal concept which influences in every individual’s life. Friends who are close to a person can be a very good supporter and protector in many aspects of life. While some people assert that to select a friend always choose the one who can help you when trouble things happen in your life, others claims that one of the essential point to choose a friend is to trace him/her whether she/he can make you happy and make you laugh in critical situations when you are down. I personally believe that a friend to be selected should be a person who can help and guide the time you need it. In what follow, I will support my perspective.
The most significant reasons is that people need someone to help them when they are in very bad situation in life rather than their parents because sometimes people cannot tell all their problems to parents although they are much closer in their life but most of the time friend is a person who you can trust and because of their loyalty you can rely on them to solve your problem. Furthermore, the value of friends counts when you need help and you are in bad situation. For instances, a single, young Indian actor committed suicide last month, unfortunately after his committed suicide they got to know he had many problems in his professional life but because he had not have close friend in market he could not talk and resolve his problem. As a result, one day he could not bear those situation, and he decided to finished his life. If he had friend, he could have survived his situation to be solved.
Another equally important reason is that friends who help you when you face a problem is a friend who can push you to reach your aims in your personal life. An effective friend is the one who his win will be you win and vice versa. Normally, when you choose friends who are helpful in life, they will be you very close friends in future. These sort of friends are capable of impel you to change your situation in better and affordable way. For example, one of my sister always says that her friends always help her in her life when she face any issue. Another sister of mine, she claims that friends are for fun only that’s why when she is in tribal problem no one of them are available to help her.
To sum up, a person you select to be in your friendship circle should be helpful rather than being funny and enjoyable. A friend who is helpful can motivate you and solve your problems patiently and refresh your life with many goal ideas. With friends who care about you to solve your problems you can reach your wishes because f their ideas and solutions might come from their different experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 674, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...rofessional life but because he had not have close friend in market he could not tal...
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Line 2, column 784, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'those situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; those situations
... As a result, one day he could not bear those situation, and he decided to finished his life. I...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...fe, they will be you very close friends in future. These sort of friends are capable of i...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'These nulls'?
Suggestion: This sort; These nulls
...ll be you very close friends in future. These sort of friends are capable of impel you to ...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...ds always help her in her life when she face any issue. Another sister of mine, she ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, sort of, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49385245902 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31072592052 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428278688525 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9478575607 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.421052632 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6842105263 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433061167329 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167485539926 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127595839485 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301519222882 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689498119909 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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