Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The Internet plays a pivotal role in the modern society since it helps us to learn something new and save time. Personally, however, I think that governments should found the improvement of public transportation than the Internet. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, it will help people to save money and contribute them to enjoyable activities. The majority of residents of small towns in the United States have to have their own vehicles in order to commute because of a lack of public transportation in their communities. Purchasing a car is very expensive and people who have auto loans struggle to pay their bills. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I live in Ohio, in a countryside and there are no busses here, and so all members of my family have to have an automobile to commute to work. In this way, my husband and I pay for two vehicles every month. If busses or trains are available for us, we could own only one car and save some money on travel. Although it is enjoyable to drive a comfortable car, I would prefer to vacation in different places every year and make memories with my beloved ones.
Secondly, citizens, who live in places where public transportation is developed, move a lot, which facilitates their well-being. These days, it is important to stay healthy because the pace of the modern life is incredibly fast and overwhelming. For instance, when I lived in a big city, I had to use the subway to commute to work. The subway was three blocks away from my apartment, and therefore I had to walk about twenty minutes every day. As I said above, today I live in a town where to public transportation is available, so I drive everywhere and do not walk much. As a result, I gained fifteen pounds and continue gaining weight, which makes me feel heavy and unhappy. Despite the fact that sometimes I work out at a local gym, I can do it only twice a day, which is not enough to lose weight.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that governments should sponsor the development of public transportation rather than the Internet. This is because it can financially benefit people, and because citizens will be able to maintain their health.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66246851385 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81199708877 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554156171285 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2825034253 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.55 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132487381413 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397673595757 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478532681997 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870993722264 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424877405548 0.0645574589148 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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