Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The modern life offers people a lot of knowledge and we should use this expertise wisely. Personally, I think that it is crucial to be aware of what is going on around the globe. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First if all, it can help people to increase intellectually and socialize easily. When a person has wide ken, he could be interesting to talk with, and so he can make a lot of friends. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I enjoy reading the National Geographic magazine. I learn about other cultures and political affairs all around the world from this written source of knowledge. When I meet new people, I can always maintain a conversation on barely every topic that they would like to talk about. As a result, I have established great relationships with a myriad of interesting people with different background from different cultures. That is why I am certain that citizens should get to know what is happening around them.
Secondly, when travelers know about political affairs that are happening in other parts of the planet, they can vacation safely. Through television programs and the Internet, people can learn about conflicts in other counties and therefore, do not travel this direction. For instance, as I said above I read a magazine that describes not only environmental problems but also provides information about wars on the Earth. In this way, when I plan my vacation, I avoid taking a trip to destinations that can be dangerous. This is incredibly important for me since I always take my children with me. Although some individuals argue that watching to international news can be stressful, it helps travelers to ensure that their vacation will be safe for them and their families.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that general public should know about events that take place around the world. This is because it can help them to communicate with others, and have a secure life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... In conclusion, I strongly believe that general public should know about events that take plac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87315634218 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8092385691 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6214626086 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9473684211 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150112060501 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466199675656 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366939964888 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100988656327 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315854025675 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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