Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.

As time goes on and technology improves different aspects of our lives can be affected by it. Governments hold a major role in these impacts. As an example, many people have different beliefs about either govenment has to spend money on internet access or public transportation. In my perspective, spending money to develope internet access is more critical. This is my mindset because the country's economy and educational system can benefit from it. The following discussions reveal my stand and reasoning around the topic.

First of all, providing companies with new technologies can leed to more economical situations for sociaty. Drawing from my own experience, since the pandemic has started the company that I work with has switched to online workplace in Zoom meetings. In this way the cost of renting an office has eliminated, therefore the company can trive from this benefit. For this reason, the govenment should improve internet access because the internet can provide this asset.

Secondly, better access to the internet can make educating for many people more effective. Moreover, many people can benefit from schools or universities to be more productive. As an illustration, If classes are held online, students don't need to spend a lot of their daily time to go from home to the school and visaversa(?). In addition, they have access to the videos of their classes to review them. Therefore, not only can they improve their knowledge but also they get better scores at school compared to regular classes. Thus, in order to provide high quality online classes, access to the internet must develope.

In conclusion, with the above in mind, it is more essential for govenments to improve the internet access than public transportation, because many companies can benefit from it. Furthermore, the educational system will develope. If the country become more productive, everyone will have higher life quality standards.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n, If classes are held online, students dont need to spend a lot of their daily time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26774193548 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81106221198 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1089730385 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9473684211 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251611951418 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793473414578 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770864482438 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167932147596 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401237894444 0.0645574589148 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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