Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

The 20th and 21st centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes they have made in human lives. Perhaps the most important milepost of these two centuries is that improve Internet access, and development of social media. In such a sophisticated world, the influence of the Internet on daily life is not hidden from anyone. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that in the modern world is necessary for all people to access the fast Internet. If provide these facilities, the need for public transportation will be reduced. Most people use the Internet to manage their works from far away. Some works such as administrative and banking work could be done faster, and better in these circumstances.
Another reason which should be taken into consideration is that in a very special situation like a pandemic of coronavirus important of using the Internet, and social media become clear for everyone. For example, during the last two years, the world has been in a pandemic, many of the works were dependent on the Internet. The education system has also been affected by a pandemic and has become virtual. Therefore, the classes are held online with the help of the Internet.
the last but not the least point to be mentioned is that whit improving Internet access environmental pollution can be reduced. For example, the use of paper is reduced and consequently fewer trees are cut down, all of which help reduce global warming. What may come as a surprise is an accumulation of evidence suggesting an increase in using the Internet. In recent years, when the world was plagued by the coronavirus pandemic, environmental pollution has been reduced and global temperatures have dropped.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that increase in access to the Internet is very important, and it is essential for the future of humanity.
There is a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0056022409 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89296486973 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518207282913 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4577442367 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2777777778 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188215476964 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560815108609 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438052983833 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905539621486 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195666416909 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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