Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In the contemporary society, with the rapid development of the technology, especially the convenient acces to the Internet, people have the capacity to dinish every thing with just a click. Therefore, many people assert that the goverment should spend much resources on the improvement of the Internet network. However, I, on the contrary contend that the authority concerned should spend much more effort and money on the publci trans portation for the following reasons, including facilitating a sound job market and cutting back up the pollution .
To commence with, with the urbanlization and higher tendency of getting a well-paid job, more people choose to flock into the city to seize the chance of getting the satisfactory job. Under the circumstances, when much more people all live near the metropolitan, the traffic there will be even congested than ever before and higher risk of car accidents. Increasing death toll caused by the traffic jam arises simultanelusly. People in the past may simply spend one hour a day commuting from their home to the workfield. But in the recent state, most people all indicate that they have spent at least two times the commuting hour than ever before. This long-waiting and exhausting queezing may keepl worsenzing if the new public transportation hasn't been renovated greatly.
To keep in steady pace of becoming a international city for the good job market not only for the local citizens and the foreigners, it is undoubted that the renovated and advanced improvement should be done on the transportation system.
Besides, we people should not neglect the potectial aftermath that the increaing population near the city may occur. If the public transportation is well-available for a range of citizens, more people will have no option but to drive their peivate. If the situation, sadly, happens, deterioating air pollution could be forseen right away. People may then have higher risk of getting lung-related diseases, allergic and other innumerable potential negative consequence. What's more, we should also keep in mind that once more private are working during the weekday, this will lead to the consequence of urban island. Urban island, which may become more detrimental to humand society and the environment because of the combination of the global warming, may gradually and significantly affect both the living condition of the human and the flora and fauna with unexpected results.
Even though the Internet does make the lives of human conveninet unprecedentedly. But if we neglect that we are actually in a out-dated system of public transportation, we seem to haven't made a huge progress in the civilization . Like the Roman Empire, it is just its advanced schdelued transportation system that makes them have the chance to predominate at that time.
In conclusion, by forcing the govenment to put more emphasis on the improvement of the public transportation, the whole country can create a better atmosphere for the work field and reduce the potential negative consequence of the corwded traffic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... assert that the goverment should spend much resources on the improvement of the Int...
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Suggestion: .
...market and cutting back up the pollution . To commence with, with the urbanliza...
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Suggestion: hasn't
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Suggestion: an
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Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a and fauna with unexpected results. Even though the Internet does make the lives of hum...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge progress'.
Suggestion: huge progress
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, at least, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2584.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27346938776 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02401048844 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548979591837 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 802.8 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.874770693 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.2 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172907029646 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480652045369 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390861181046 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932518946216 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373729694841 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.