Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.

I think people should listen more to different points of view.
First of all, exposure to different points of view from our own can broaden our horizons and dialectically look at the problem. The individual's perspective is limited. Our views are often influenced by child discipline, schools, society, the times and so on. And listening to other points of view allows us to get a sense of what other people are thinking. For example, in China we often advocate drinking hot water when you have a fever, but in the United States people think that drinking ice water is more helpful in relieving the high temperature of a fever. When two people listen to each other, they think about which idea is better for their health.
Second, a different perspective can help us make better decisions. There is good and bad in every decision. We often only see the results we want to see, and ignore the hidden drawbacks. The person who raises the objection will certainly raise the reasons for the objection, these reasons will let us find their own thinking holes. Even if we eventually stick to our original decision, opposing opinions can help us refine our plan or view.
And while listening to our own point of view can make us feel good and gain a sense of identity, it doesn't help us to solve any questiongs. When all we hear is agreement, we become more confident that we have made the right judgment rather than reflecting and thinking, which leads to blind confidence.For example, in the Qing dynasty, emperors and officials thought they were the most powerful nation, without knowing how far the rest of the world, except for China, had come. So the old China was unprepared for war. This kind of blind confidence has brought great disaster to China in the past.
So I think we should listen more to different opinions and take them seriously.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, while, except for, for example, i think, kind of, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74223602484 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51464020836 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9832086972 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8235294118 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110074616727 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391913260646 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415930854542 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805267568303 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457993660809 0.0645574589148 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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