Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally, I definitely think that governments should invest money to improve the Internet service than any thing else. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the Internet can be used for a plenty of essential life needing such as learn, work, and shop. Obviously, with the rapid improvments in the technology the use of the Internet has become important to accomplish our needs. For Instance, in COVID-19 pandomic, when we had to stay at home. We all thought that we could not be able to contenue our life. But using the Internet we beome able to study, finish our work, shop, and even communicate with our friends and relatives. Thanks to the Internet!
Secondly, with the massive use of the Internet, the puplic transportation has become less used than before. For example, when I wanted to apply for a new job, I did not need to go the company bulding by train, all what I did is just to apply on the company website. Therefore, the Internet sometimes can be an alternative way of the puplic transportation.
To sum up, I firmly believe that the government must spend money improving the access of the Internet, This is because the Internet in necessarly in our daily life, and because it is used more than the puplic transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73245614035 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75428469475 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9644860434 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0909090909 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27195306522 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101835908797 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813377157839 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171465723203 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467906006416 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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