Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Change of place of residence will affect us in different ways. Therefore, there have been debates about whether it is detrimental to move from place to place or not. I believe it is better to move from our country or town to other places and gain different experiences rather than stay in one place all our lives. I will explain my reasonings in the following essay.
First, we can expand our social circle by moving. When we enter another country we meet new people with different hobbies and personalities and make friends with them while perserving our relationships from past. For example, a friend of mine traveled to another country to get a new job. She made friends with some of her colleagues and was pretty close to them concurrently she kept in touch with her friends from her town and video called them numerous times as well. Afterward, when her friend Rose went to her place while traveling as a tourist she introduced one of her new friends to her. They got along very well and fell love. Their currently married and expecting their first child. Therefore, by moving she didn't lose friends rather she made new friends and introduced them to her old friends which even led to them getting married. Hence, based on this experience it's unlikely to lose your old friends because you moved away especially when using new technologies allow us to communicate with our friends easily.
Second, we can develop new skills in new environments. By living in new countries with different cultures from our own we can learn greatly about what is important and how to act to situations that rarely ever happen in our country, which can lead to many opportunities in future. For example, my cousin Ahmad, moved away and started working in the France 4 years ago. He explained that there were many differences in the way the work was handeled and that he learned a lot by working there. Afterward, he resigned wanting to get hired in an international company. he passed the elections very fast landing a job at his favourite company. Later, he told me that the employer had told him he was their best choice because he had experience working in various environments, therefore, he could adapt faster to changes that occurs in this line of work.Likewise, I believe that by moving from place to place we become more adapt to change and can experience new cultures and gain new skills from different environments.
In conclusion, I believe moving from our place to a new location has multiple merits, including expanding our social circles and gaining new experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...r first child. Therefore, by moving she didnt lose friends rather she made new friend...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y, which can lead to many opportunities in future. For example, my cousin Ahmad, moved aw...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... get hired in an international company. he passed the elections very fast landing ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Likewise
...hanges that occurs in this line of work.Likewise, I believe that by moving from place to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, likewise, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80995475113 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6618106178 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518099547511 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9526756241 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.238095238 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0476190476 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207394280642 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642471921393 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579227901435 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109742820778 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709235016407 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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