Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally assumed that being in a place or a town or even your country for the entire of life plays a paramount role to make friends. That having been considered, whether changing place make us to lose our old friend or not has always been a much-debated argument. Despite the argument asserts that change your hometown makes lose close and dear friends, I believe otherwise, maintaining that new location may be offered more opportunities and with improving technology can keep our touch with friends.
First and most obvious, we cannot lose sight of the fact that, change our current location and moving to another place could be introduced us more opportunities to grow. Strictly speaking, go another town or country is not always a bad thing, and even makes us more productive and more inspired person. To make this point clear, the best example that fits in this argument is, when someone immigrates to another country to study a new subject, this chance opens new doors for a person to change their life in a positive way. Therefore, it goes without saying that change location in order to find a new perspective and new opportunity is good and since moving to a new place, you can make new friends.
Another equally important point to consider is, with breakthroughs in science and technology, moving and immigrating to another site is not a challenge anymore. In essence, people could be in touch with old friends and families. For the purpose of illustration, let’s consider the issue of, there are several applications that someone be able to make video calls with, and be in touch with a friend. As a result, changing location is not a challenge in current years.
In the final analysis, although some might contend that a new place make you lose old friend, I take issue with them and I believe this mindset is nothing but a tunnel vision that fails to consider the importance of advancement in technology and a better chance to progress in a new place. In the grand scheme of things, it behooves people to do anything for themselves to make better life even if this means leaving their hometown and their friends, however with new applications we can always keep our contact with our besties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...doors for a person to change their life in a positive way. Therefore, it goes without saying that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80939947781 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64784142733 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480417754569 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8581572192 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.692307692 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4615384615 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223349525277 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866284988137 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407513612357 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144847855149 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214879531903 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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