Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is sometimes justified not to tell the truth.
I do not think that under any circumstances we are justified to hide the truth from those who are entitled to knowing it.
Firstly, if we hide all or part of the truth from someone, we are depriving them of the information that might be able to shape their future because they might make decisions based on incomplete information. This way, we have given ourselves the right to indirectly decide a person’s fate, which is unacceptable in any situation.
Secondly, from my personal experience, the more trust I put in other people and the more I show them the complete and bigger picture by telling the truth, the more they surprise me. There have been times in my life where I have thought that I know better and do not need to tell the person who was affected by the information. However, after telling them, I was rewarded with their understanding and compassion. For example, when my aunt died, I was informed by a friend that insufficient medical care by the hospital staff was to be blamed partially for her death. I was first hesitant to share this information with the rest of my family but when I finally did, they accepted what had happened and were able to reach closure. While before I told them, they were constantly wondering why this tragedy had happened when my aunt had a pretty simple condition when she went to the hospital.
Last but not least, while one is holding information from another person, they might be doing the same. What I mean is that we might know something and think that we know the whole story but another person, whom we are holding this truth from, might have another piece of information which they are holding from us. Therefore, if either of us makes a decision, it will be based on incomplete information. While sharing the things we know and letting them know the part of the truth we are aware of might cause them the share as well. This way, we will see a more complete picture and will be able to make better decisions together.
All things considered, I think that we must learn to trust others and always give them the whole truth. I believe, by doing so, we will over time be rewarded with other people’s trust and they will be willing to always tell the truth as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, i mean, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61097256858 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52627192972 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471321695761 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.1753765535 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5625 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106392174257 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440708272147 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438132403321 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782433379356 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441061879954 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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