Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Do respect for who teaches you something, is an important consideration for all of us. Some people believe that teachers were more appreciated by society in the past than these days. However, others disagree. Personally, I agree with this statement because I think the morality has been getting worst over the past several years among people and some new things are replaced as a source to study instead of teachers. Looking more precisely on these stuff and analyzing people's behavior will justify this opinion.

First of all, because of some reasons, people can't control themselves in particular situation. As a result, they don't have respect for others specially for teachers. If i want to mention one of these reasons, i should talk about economical issues. As a matter of fact, when people are in economical pressure and they can't buy their families’ need, they will out of control and they won't have any respect for people who valued by society. So, teachers as a group of people who should paid attention by all of people, are in a bad situation just because our society faces with many problems and the result is eliminating morality between humans.

Secondly, people are using some new stuff for education purposes. In fact, the technology has been steadily increase and we replace our traditional sources like teachers with these new things. For example, many application in cellphones created for children. They can easily access to these applications and get lots of information about their case study. In this condition, teachers are not admired by society because they are useless for important groups of people who gained from them. Thus, as we see, the technology doesn't let people specially students to use some traditional ways and care about teacher's points and this can be a logical reason to not appreciate teachers.

As mentioned above, some circumstances remove morality in people and they don't have tendency to admire teachers. In addition to that, the technology has replaced as a source of getting knowledge about variety of things instead of gaining experience from teachers. These aspects of this problem seem to be enough to have worst situation for teachers in society.

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...ts of this problem seem to be enough to have worst situation for teachers in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, in particular, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64616002463 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5463227933 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2631578947 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159625549362 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512859449105 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596440117421 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103573835673 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590481812755 0.0645574589148 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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